For years, the capital of Syria, Damascus, has been a thriving place, but in the past year, it has been a war zone against the Presidents Military Forces and the People, who have been branded with the name Rebels. The conflict began sometime ago. It plays in this format. Now the people have never always been happy with the treatment they have been given, but they always remained loyal to their leaders, but the final chord was struck when several children, according to the week news, were arrested and taken off to Damascus without the parents knowledge.
In terms of Politics, everyone is at a stand still. So far, neither the U.N. or NATO has any plans to intervene. President Bashal grow stronger every day, but it is not clear if we should involve our own country into the war. But without some sort of intervention, the Red cross can not access the area, leaving thousand injured and unable to attend hospitals due to the danger. What the president has done to these people is clearly a war crime, but politicians have their head in a hole hoping that it will blow over like a flu. It can not work this way, but it is unclear what should be done
The question we are left with is this. Should the U.N. and U. S. intervene to bring peace? Should we leave the Syrian people to figure it out for themselves? Yes and No. In time of a war when the live of young children and families are being taken, it is time to remember that the war in Afghanistan is a load of crap and that there is a real war with a real problem. We can not leave this to the contry it self because look at how Bashal is handling it. There is no more room for excuse. We need to do something before it is too late for Syria.
Sources:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63a1vKJLN10 This source cover the topic of tourture of rebels.
The Horror of Homs (street fighting in Syria):http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SyQIv5wyYGE&feature=related This source was used to discuss the fighting.
Time for the West to Intervene in Syria?: http://theweek.com/article/briefing_blog/296/syrias-uprising This source was used to describe the possibility of intervention in the war
Peter,
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice summary of what's happening in Syria. You law it out smoothly in an almost story-like way. It's written well.
But I'd like to you to present the question right away, so that you do not stray away from the format.
You should have a thesis, like, "The US needs to intervene in this atrocity." Then you can have a clear opposition paragraph that outlines the dangers, hesitations, and reasons why US intervention would be the wrong move.
Your third paragraph contains your clear analysis. Although you say "yes and no", try to represent one as best you can.
Overall, nice work. Great video and list of sources.
GR: 85